Who likes the poem?

Wintertime girls








Yeah i like it when girls act fly


Can’t find the one who i think is mine


Met this girl three summers ago


We went out


Went real slow


N sync makes me sink


Had a bunch of hits


But they make me sick


And i think it’s fly when girls stop by


I like girls who wear gucci and bench


Id take her if one she’d end my days


Id take her if she was my one wish


Now my old flame has gone


Found a new lover


What is going on


Japanese takeaways are really sleazy


Baby can you always please me


If only you would come and see me


Lfo rock like a sonnet


I’ll turn it on cos i want it


Wish she would call me up and make me laugh


Hip mama spanked lap daddy


Let her do it cos she had me


Told her to do it again


Cos she said she liked me


Meet you one winter


2007


Took my heart baby and sent it to heaven


2008


Wondering what you’re doing


Do you wanna date


The great lebron james, was no 23


You made me like you baby cos baby you like me


Could you be the best girl that i ever did see


When you touch my soul


You take it real deep and slow


Buzz like a hornet


Chris brown was singing my song


Made me smile when i was feeling low


Made me wanna say yo


And tell you to take it real slow


Why do i buzz baby cos i want it


Wanna take you home and share cherry coke


Would like to laugh baby when you tell a joke


Hip hop baby, come over here


Baby i feel much better when you’re near


Whistle me baby can’t even think


Baby justin timberlake is my man n sync


Wrote you a whole bunch of sonnets


Am i thinking romance baby


Yeah cos i want it


Used to hate skool baby, so i played hookie


Do you like it


Do you remember


Someday back in 1999, said i am gonna find me a girl


And make her mine


Now i’ve found you baby i am gonna make you all mine


Always remember be b bop style to your best boy wild


Know how to act wild to make your boy smile


Me and my girl were like alex p keaton


Now we ain’t even speaking


Used to want to call her up, but what’s the use


Feel deep in love but what’s the use


I don’t care for her anymore cos i’ve found someone


Who i could love so much more


Remember you can always be my baby girl


You come from burnham on sea where they speak real slow


Remember baby you rock my world


Cos you can become my favourite girl


Wintertime girls got it going on


Shake and wiggle to a favourite song


Wintertime girls are the kind i like


I’ll steal your honey


Like you stole my mic


Oldtime songs, fade cos i no longer miss it


My mind takes me back there oh so quick


Even thinking of my ex makes me oh so sick


Thinking about that summer and i am bugged cos i miss it


Ruby red slippers and a bunch of treats


Used to call her up baby cos she was oh so sweet


Baby we broke up about a year cos my feelings for her became oh so cold


Baby i really wanna think of you


Cos i am really into you


I know you like me to, so what you wanna do


When i met you i said my name was russ


Hun can we please fall deep in love


Some girls are worthwhile


Some are so so


Sometimes girls come and go


Wintertime girls are fine, remember this spring


You will be there just with me


Then you will be all mine

Who likes the poem?
x. poem or life story? not bad though. x
Reply:i love it. i think she will like it too... let me know what she thinks!!
Reply:wow. got any more?
Reply:I know you must have worked really hard on this...Dude, its too long....seriously....also, talking about your Ex in a poem for your present girlfriend?


Not only is that retarded, but it tells her your ex is still on your mind...Men should never talk about their ex's with their new woman....wrong, wrong....


If I were you, I would shorten it up a ton, and write about your relationship with your girl...what it was, what it is now, and what you want for the two of you in the future...


Good luck.
Reply:Wow. That's one heck of a poem and is awesome! I write poetry myself and i've never heard a better poem than this. I don't think you gf will have any probs w/this poem. it's so romantic and so sweet , esp towards her. I say you go for because if you don't do it now, who knows what can happen if you wait too long?What you need u to do is think about how you feel towards giving her the poem. Do you think that she will like it? I have no objection. I personally think she's gonna love it. Make sure though that the mood and atmosphere are romantic. But before you take in any words of advice from us:


Listen to your heart.


It'll lead you the way.


Listen to your soul


or give it away


Why ask others


When your heart is the one?


Listen to your heart and


It'll never let you down.


Your innermost feelings


Will let you know


The one path


That you must go.


All your Confusions


Will die away.


Listen to your heart


And it'll show you the way.





Hey. It's not just you dealing with rough years. We all are at one time or another. The best thing to do is just let the pain go. Just let it go. Take a deep breath, count to ten and let it out. Relax yourself of stress because stressing is dangerous. It can honestly hurt you memory part in the brain. Don't feel unloved any time. There is one person out there in the world that's thinking of you. Remember, To the world you may be just one person, but to one person, you may be the world. Try and try your hardest to make her love you, but don't push her into it. That could lead her away. Every time u talk to her or r with her, b yourself, because there's nothing better. Be confident. Listen to her and what she has to say about her year or feelings or life, etc... Let her know how you feel. Slowly approach her with loving comments. Be a friend to her as well as her man. Be understading towards her. All these things will help you go near her. As far as life goes, just go with the flow. Life brings you rotten eggs, throw them out, but when life brings you flowers, let them blossom everywhere. Let their color flow. As far as finances go, look at some qualities you have. Are u a good writer? Judging from the poem, it seems like u r. If so find a job that has to do with your writing skills. What are some other things you are strong in? Whatever your strenghts are, dominate them. Use them for your benefits. Find a job that covers your strenghts. Put in a good word for yourself, ask your friends to do likewise. Girls, well, the come and go. But your girl won't ever leave you. You'll know is that girl is your girl. You feel it. You'll feel her around u when she's not, you'll think about her constantly. You will feel like your world is in her arms. All the cruelty of the world will melt away when you see her. All the coldness around you will be so warm with her around. When you find her, don't let her go. don't do anything that'll push her away. Anyways, i think your gf will love the poem, not only because it's absolutely wonderful, but you wrote it, and from the heart and you took your time. Best of luck with everything. Hope this helped.
Reply:Sounds like the LFO song a little. The one called Girl on tv or something. The poem is okay but to be fair I hate poems.
Reply:is it poem?
Reply:LOVE IT!!!!! XD
Reply:WOW!!!! Ladies and Gentlemen...we have a future star on our hands here!!! DAMM boy...you ever thought about writing songs (cuz that would be a HIT) It.s f'n FLY.








one thing however. maybe you could do someting about that alex keaton phrase. you have you and me...but only one name. just a suggestion.





No matter...that s*** is still off the chain
Reply:yes she will it is spot on.
Reply:that's called a novel, not a poem. it does help to write down your thoughts. i feel your pain.
Reply:its cute but it kinda sounds like another song... i dont remember what its called...