We are together again. what do you think about this?

once again, we are together


It is a long night of winter.


I’m watching the sky.


The rays of The moon is presenting


Their pleasing dance on the glittering stage of water.


The crystal clear water is mirroring the moon


That seems to swim along with my shadow.


The moonbeams are piercing their dark leaves


Just as the arrows of just injured a devotee’s heart.


The beauty of the starry sky is also overpowering this.


I have lost in watching the hide and the seek game of the moon


Moreover, the stars behind the patches of the clouds.


My heart is humming strange love song


The sweet sound is floating rhythmically and disappearing in distance.


After a while I go to bed.


I’m trying to grope in the dark of the heart.


There are my loneliness and I.


In shelter of dreams,


I’m waiting for some one.


With whom


I’m dreaming.


In the desert of heart,


I am growing a garden of love.


There are dark dense clouds of her locks.


Blowing of cool breeze is exhaling my soul and body.

We are together again. what do you think about this?
hi raj


its really touching........great going..............thnx for ur wonderful verses!!!!
Reply:hi r@j....





i should say dat ur poem really rockz....really very emotional n touching.....i think dis poem iz really very mast n it needs 2 b published......its really gud....tc...sweet dreamz..bye...





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Reply:*Too long and posted in the wrong category !!!!
Reply:Whoa !! Its beautiful !! :-) :-)
Reply:I think it's really good. I like it.


I think there is more to this poem than just being good.


It's kind of sad.
Reply:it is really beautiful. *tear tear*