Is this a good valentine's day poem for a homemade card?

I am making her a valentines day and this is the poem i wrote, I was wondering if it was a good poem:





There's this sweet surrender running through the air


Cold awkward silence with no despair


Then I see the light walking in the far


It's you, and everything you are.





Surely a cheerfully warm day


Easing all of the Wintry drear


Allowing us to appreciate


Everything that we hold so dear





Your soft touch


Reminds me of the glistening snow


Peaceful and serene


With plenty of time to blow





On a day filled with pink and red


Irresistible devotion darts through my head


And love hovers amongst us all


Permitting our hearts to easily fall





On this harsh winter day


Let's break the cold, warm the heavens


And leave all of our worries behind


Gorgeous I've got something important to request…





Will you be my Valentine?

Is this a good valentine's day poem for a homemade card?
For a V-day card it is great.


You may want to ask in the poetry section on what literary value it has.


If it is good enough enter it in your county fair. She may like that you are willing to make public your feelings.
Reply:no cause i am a guy but good poem
Reply:I like it very much!


Place the poem NOT into a manufactured card. Think of something far more personal.


If you are offering her a present, wrap it in cloth, upon which you have written this by fountain pen.


First write it down with pencil, then go over the words with the ink delicately so that they do not spill onto the cloth.


Rice paper will also do nicely. Some designs upon it, may help the emphasis of the sentiment.


Good Luck!
Reply:Aww Its the cuteest thing ever!!





She'll Love it and its from the heart ! Bonus!





Love the last paragraph
Reply:Beautiful! So lovely, you'r e quiet a composer of words.
Reply:It's beautiful and hearfelt. She'll love it!
Reply:Whatever the girls say.
Reply:I look at a tree,


And what do I see?


My Valentine's face


Smiling back at me.





I spot a cute rock,


But, oh what a shock,


For it reminds of you


And that is no crock.





Everywhere that I turn,


My feelings just burn


With thoughts about you,


My love please don’t spurn!





Each rock and each tree,


Each cloud and each bee,


The earth and the sea,


It all reminds me...





I love you awesomely!
Reply:valentines day was invented by a card company.