Poetry to a girl?!?!?

I posted a poem yesterday and since then I have had a breakthrough and wrote several more. I want to send them to this girl but cant decide. i really like her and I think poetry is the way to go! Which one should I send and why? Please give opinions on others too!!! :





You are the spring for which I longed


in the frosty winter time.


My heart greeted you with holy terror


when first your glance lighted upon me.


I had only ever seen strangers;


my surroundings were friendless.


As if I had never known it


was everything that befell me.


But you I recognized plain and clear;


when my eyes saw you, you belonged to me.


What I hid in my heart, what I am,


bright as day it came to me,


like a resounding echo it fell upon my ear,


when in frosty lonely strangeness


I saw my friend.


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Friendly solitude, amorous breezes,


blossoming plants and lovely flowers, hearken


to the laments of an happy lover who,


delighted, confides in you.


How much it costs my afflicted heart to keep silent


and pretend, when so close to she who conquered it!


Gently caressing zephyrs,


oh fly to my beloved


and tell her I adore her


and to keep her heart true to me.


And you plants and tender flowers


which my happiness have seen,


tell her that you never saw


a love more rare beneath the sky.


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I adore your dear eyes,


darts of love,


your rays


rejoice my heart.


My sad heart,


which constantly calls you


its beloved,


begs you for mercy.


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I feel the way this divine image


fills my heart with new emotion.


Though I cannot name what this is,


yet I feel it burning here like fire.


Might this sensation be love?


Yes, yes! It can only be love!


Oh, if only I could find her!


Oh, if she but stood before me now!


I should ... should ... warmly and virtuously ...


What should I do? ...


Rapturously I should


press her to this ardent breast,


and then she would be mine for ever.


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Ah, you were the first person


whom I ever truly loved;


and you will be the last


to be sheltered in my heart.


Dear words of my beloved!


O my sweet, dear hope!


The more I hear your words,


the greater grows my passion.


When one soul unites with another,


what joy a heart feels!


Ah, eliminate from life


all that is not love!


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I no longer know what I am or what I'm doing,


Now I'm burning, now I'm made of ice ...


You make me change color,


You make me tremble.


At the very word love or beloved


My heart leaps and pounds,


And to speak of it fills me


With a longing I can't explain!


I speak of love when I'm awake,


I speak of it in my dreams,


To the stream, the shade, the mountains,


To the flowers, the grass, the fountains,


To the echo, the air, the breezes,


Which carry away with them


The sound of my fond words ...


And if I've none to hear me


I speak of love to myself.

Poetry to a girl?!?!?
I really like the first or the thrid one , the others are good but if your not with the girl already it might kind of scare her lol the other ones come off a little strong but if thats what u want go for it =] ......


personally the third one is good its short but it makes a statement; without sounding weird its a really cute way of saying you like her and it has some kind of depth to it that will just make her go "wow". Id totally reccomend that one to give to her, that way she knows how you feel about her and how she makes you feel ,without getting into too much detail. And poetry is totally the way to go , im so glad theres some guys out there who do this, instead of saying ooo ur a hottie or acting retarted to try n get her- u got it right a poem is so sweet especially the ones you've got she really cant refuse this.











G/L ***
Reply:Girls love poetry! At least I do. Why not send them all to her [over time] since they're all really good :)
Reply:The last one? and girls that like romantic gestures, like many do, like poetry written specifically for them.
Reply:to ask if girls like poetry... hum that is like asking if boys like foot ball. many do but others could care less, and another group might find it revolting. Is this girl that holds your heart the one of arts, or a one of sports? of books and things, or of boxing rings? If you are not sure you can go ahead and give it to her. It couldn't hurt.


I personally like the first one, and the one that starts "ah you were the first person wom I ever tully loved
Reply:I cant choose since it's hard to do so. but yeah girls loves poetry,
Reply:I adore your dear eyes,


darts of love,


your rays


rejoice my heart.


My sad heart,


which constantly calls you


its beloved,


begs you for mercy.








This one is one that id love...its simple and sweet. It usually depends on the girl...im not a fan of poetry..but its so sweet when i guy writes a poem for a girl. Good Luck....
Reply:well i dont know how well you know this girl if not very much then i would say the 2nd one its a softer tone and talks more about her the last one sounds like your talking about you you you the more compliments about her the better yes we like poems especially ones written for us but things like the phrase the first time i saw you i knew you belong to me instead the first time i saw you i knew you were the one for me or we could be happy together the first one sounds to demanding kinda creepy so just choose words like together or you focus on her btw you could use any of the poems they are all great the last one you cand add words or remove them like 'because of you i speak of love when im awake etc good luck:)