What do you think of my new poem?
The happiness laughter smiles and all
have all past away like summer and fall
winter is here cold and filled with sorrow
I'm not looking forward to waking up tomorrow
Im tired of being hurt all the time
It feels like Im always covered with slime
anger that never goes away
over something that happened yesterday
you used to be sweet and loving
now your just pushing and shoving
tears running quickly down my face
time slows down not wanting to win the race
I want to be free from you once more
but when i am my heart does not soar
Im tied to you like a string to a ball
Always hoping you'll let me fall
New Poem???
Wow!! Thats gets a 9 1/2 out 10 easy!! I loved how it has a feeling of being trapped and wanting to let go! It's deep and filled with meaning, Great poem!
Reply:its nice
sounds like u want to be dumped by a guy?
Reply:osom
Reply:I love it
It's beautiful, simple, and deep :)
keep it up!
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