The scarlet winds of springtime
breathes life into these frozen wings of winter.
Oh, how these once icy tears
used to weep through my eyes!
But now I know no sorrow;
all my troubles melt away.
For into your open arms of warmth,
a smile says, I'll stay.
Hey, butterfly. Butterfly, flutter by
and draw a rainbow for these gracious skies.
No troubled cloud is able to cry
for you, butterfly.
So fly with me through the summer and the fall
when those lazy leaves can day-dream
while our two souls soar on the trickling breeze
through the troughs and trees.
And all our thoughtless troubles
will be a thousand miles away.
And i'll be able to open my wings and fly
with your sweetest smiles that say,
Hey, butterfly. Butterfly, flutter by
and draw a rainbow for these gracious skies.
My troubled clouds won't cry a touch of rain
for you fly with so much love, little butterfly.
Is my poem okay or is it just another cliche love poem?
The only part I found to be overly cliche is the second stanza. I like the sort of refrain of the poem. I particularly like the line, "Hey butterfly. Butterfly, flutter by." I just find it really neat.
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