What if THIS was WRITTEN for YOU? (girls)?

i was bored today.......this is what happend...im single, so its not really for anyone








the warmest winter is passing through while snow melts on impact. the air of spring is pushing cold bitter nights away and i can see the sun in the night sky burning and drying all of these tears. morning is finally on its way opening my eyes from my nightmare and mourning is kissing me goodbye for the last time. hope's lips are the threshold sweet upon my cheek welcoming me to my eyes visioning nothing but the best because the worst is only history............

What if THIS was WRITTEN for YOU? (girls)?
awwwwwwwww!!!!!!! mary me!
Reply:thanks..uve got talent..i wud never brake up with my bf if he wrote THAT to me! :) Report It

Reply:You are a great writer. :)
Reply:i would get wet eyes
Reply:omg thats so sweet
Reply:gosh i wish i had a guy to tell me something like that...its really sweet! your good! keep it up!
Reply:I'd complament you and say (you know your really talented ) you rock at writeing so i guess your a poet and you already now it (i think i'm funny)
Reply:you did real good ....keep writing♥♥♥♥♥
Reply:what???..i did not understand a word.....where did you get this?


on a lame book, i bet..heheh ..
Reply:You may write to ME anytime!!! You are truly gifted.. both in this post and the post you wondered if you should send what you wrote to your crush...
Reply:did you say you were single?
Reply:Nicely written, way to go!
Reply:I would think what a long long long sentence.


Better use some interpunctions.


The content doesnt do much


these are cliches told a thousend times


only cheap girls fall for this
Reply:Good, but here's something more romantic, I presume.


Boy to girl - If only one star would disappear everytime I remember you, I predict whole of the sky would be starless.


Music!
Reply:I won't do this one, but check your email...I critiqued the one you just submitted that you withdrew....any girl would be lucky to have a wonderful poet like you, hon....fyi, I am a poet myself and you are very good....on your other one, I changed nothing but the form, because your use of the language, imagery, flow and expression are unsurpassed♥
Reply:that is nice and would like it written to me
Reply:I would feel confusion and happiness. I would make me feel special
Reply:I'D get as bored as you were before you wrote your poem
Reply:I didn't understand anything, try to write what you really feel without exaggerating .





remember the most beautiful feelings come from the simplest words.
Reply:i would think it was lame. sorry!
Reply:Hmm..I'd crumple it up and throw it away.





Yay!! Two points for me as it falls in the trashcan!!
Reply:blah, blah, blah... wouldn't care much for it. too dramatic
Reply:That's really beautiful; if it were written for me, I would know that I meant a lot to you and that you really cared!
Reply:I would wonder where the punctuation was.There wasnt enough. But it was sweet.Too bad it made no sense. Try words from other places than the "Word Of The Day" email from dictionary.com. M
Reply:I would be disturbed by the lack of capitalization, the misspelled words, and the poor grammar. I don't understand the passage, but the poor writing makes me not want to re-read it for understanding.
Reply:thats so sweet!

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