could someone give me an idea of where to go from here? Ok , here it is... The day I first spotted my beautiful wife will always bring a smile to my lips, and spread warmth throughout my fins. Today is our ten year anniversary, and although we have had our share of trials, I have never doubted the instant love I felt the first day I saw her. As I was intriguingly watching her, she was flipping her way through the rainbow colored coral. The courage to speak with this enchanting creature never came, so instead, I started to learn everything I could about her. Over time, I became so illusioned by her that I lost all sense of everything. Seaweed no longer tasted sweet anymore. Life had become but a motion. I had become dangerously obliviant to the ever changing tides. The beauty of our coral reef illuminated by the glow of a lavish winter moon only paled in comparison to her beauty. The day we finally exchanged words I knew right then and ther that my life would be forever changed.
If I write a couple paragraphs to a non-fictional story using flashbacks,?
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You have the makings of a good short story here. You have the main character (the narrator), half of the setting (under the sea... but when?), a couple of conflicts (mostly person vs self "courage to speak" and "lost all sense"), and a resolution (my life would be forever changed).
All you really need to round it out is a suspenseful climax, and a conclusion (happily ever after, or , "Now we just stay in the tank at night, watching our little guppies play and couldn't be more fin-slapping happy!")
Have fun. What a blessing for a lucky lady!
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