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Gingerly sweet the whisper seeps


Through the forest so deep


Beyond the king of three winters go


A freshly fallen virgin snow


Deep in the abyss kindles a spark


Can you hear the silenced lark?








Soft and tender my journey's step


To the old woman who has wept


The perilous forest is unforgiving


Especially to those among the living


Weeping still she rests near the stream


Echoes not her grieving scream








Curious eyes watch in sorrow


for none know what comes the morrow


Upon bended knee in the moon's glow


A solitary tear to the stream below


She cradles the warrior like a child


Deep within this forest so wild





Tarnished armour blades of rust


So fragile this tender trust


Linger long her mournful sobs


For a life the gods have robbed


Brave warrior of old all agree


But fate comes to even thee.

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Wow usually I don't like poetry but this one's good! No offense :)
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Very nice!
Reply:It is one of those annoyiningly good poems, I hate to love these poems, but well done, good work, you got me thinking.
Reply:Fantastic imagery. Reminds me of "Home they brought her warrior dead"
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