What do u think of my poem and i am 14 in 8th grade?

Ode to Summer


Kevin Krzewski








Oh summer your excessive humidity sucks into my skin


releasing all previous thoughts of school away,


like a leach sucks out bad blood


Without any thought in the back of my mind about


Homework Sunday night, No worries about parents


Checking powerschool and completely shunning you


Until the grade is up to par.


Without you oh glorious summer, my brain would be


As fried as a McDonalds Chicken select


Without you, the world would be bitter cold


In both mind and matter. Without your soft sky


Humanity would not rejoice. The sweet taste of steak


Being consumed into the humidity. The trees green


For they have sprouted to witness your greatness.


The sound of various species of insects is loud


However, when you remember the death and stillness of winter


This once annoying sound now comforts you.


The feeling of the handles on your bike as you


Ride through the dense air to an unknown destination.

What do u think of my poem and i am 14 in 8th grade?
not bad..... noooooottt bad...
Reply:Very very good for your age. You should keep writing, you're quite talented
Reply:I Love It! I remember feeling pretty much the same way!
Reply:Boo its one of those cheap poems that doesn't rhyme. Lameee.





Haha jus kidding. Its actually pretty good..





♥ Clare.