Okay, from request....tell me what YOU think 1-10?

this is older, but i like some of the things i say...





the warmest winter is passing through while snow melts on impact. the air of spring is pushing cold bitter nights away and i can see the sun in the night sky burning and drying all of these tears. morning is finally on its way opening my eyes from my nightmare and mourning is kissing me goodbye for the last time. hope's lips are the threshold sweet upon my cheek welcoming me to my eyes visioning nothing but the best because the worst is only history............

Okay, from request....tell me what YOU think 1-10?
That was really nice!
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Reply:OMG...that was...breathtaking!!! I think I'm in love!!! I'd give you a twelve!!!
Reply:8, but wonderfully enchanting. 8 for thought, 10 for enchantment.
Reply:10*10*10*10*10


Wow your a guy right becuase I think I'm in love, do you have anymore stuff like that.
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Reply:8!! that was very good poem!! i like it!!
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Reply:its really really really good


i'll give you an 1100000000000000 for that!!!!
Reply:Very nice -- you wrote this?





Add proper punctuation and use of capital letters and it's a 10.





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Reply:Very charming!
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you can do better, it's not as sad as you want to describe it.
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Reply:10.....that is really good!!
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that paints a beautiful picture! you should be proud of yourself.





love this part:


"hope's lips are the threshold sweet upon my cheek"
Reply:10 I love your work
Reply:10! specially "spring is pushing cold bitter nights away and i can see the sun in the night sky burning and drying all of these tears." You really must be heart broken
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Reply:Wow, that is really deep. Excellent though. I give you a 9 (try to eliminate saying "and" so much) Good Job!!
Reply:A 10/10, duh!