Do you like my poem?????

The Magic Of Christmas


A Christmas snow shall fall with grace; so filled with the joy of this day


So sweet are the sounds, like the angels’ song, or the bells on Santa’s sleigh


The warmth of family during these times warms our hearts through Winter’s chill


Peace on earth seems to be true; for the moment all is still


Our hearts seem to grow with love at this time; all hope seems to be ever true


For on this day in which Jesus had first opened his eyes, our eyes seem to be opened, too


The magic of Christmas is easy to see, for all who can see the light of this day


For this day brings a gift of a most joyful hope, that which never fades away


As these past Christmases have been filled with such magic and joy, this one shall be too


What makes this time all the better is that I get to spend it with you

Do you like my poem?????
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Reply:Yeah i think it is ausome you should go pro!
Reply:Yes... good Christmas poem.
Reply:Wow.. good job.. you managed to get feelings,events, Our Lord, and even the singing in there..





Ok.. now you have to get a blank book and keep all these wonderful poems . Or you can frame your favorites and display for the whole family to enjoy. You can even make your own x-mas cards with that.. you have options with such good writing.. thanks for sharing
Reply:Yes I like it. You should try to write songs the same way. Good luck! and Merry Christmas.
Reply:Yes and Merry


christmas to ya.
Reply:That is beautiful! Good job! I could never come up with something like that :D





Also, if you framed it and sent a christmas cup with cocoa mix, a card, and a present, that would be really thouightful, plus your aunt would luv it!





Hope this helps !





Merry Christmas!!!!!!!!!
Reply:That is great.. ^_^.. I think she would like it if she is anyone like me... xD
Reply:Amazing... You did very well on this poem... What if you framed the poem and printed it out on decorative paper. That would make a great gift for your aunt that she could hang in her house that way there whenever she reads it, she will think of Christmas and you.
Reply:yea i love it you should publish it
Reply:it is really good!


she will love it!
Reply:yea its good
Reply:yes,it is the best poem i've ever read i think you should enter it in a contest.hey,since ur an expert do you like mine? I am sad,un-likable,deceptent,i am mad ,angry diffrent,i am strange in all weird ways,they hate me ,for reasons unknown,i am alone. i call it ALONE
Reply:I think it's very good, although I think your aunt would like a poem about her better then a poem about Christmas. I would also say Christmas less if you do decide to give her this poem.
Reply:You're a Poet and you don't Noet!
Reply:Yes, it's very nice. It really gets in the heart and the spirit of Christmas. Merry Christmas to you too!!!
Reply:yeah! good job!