Sunday, February 5, 2012

HELP! What is this poem about and is it any GOOD?

Rich smell of turned earth blends


Wood smoke wishes,


Meandering dreams,


To harvest wildflowers in the cooling sun





She wandered to the old maple,


leaves brittle and bright


timothy grown high, clover sweet


cold boulders mounded, tell stories;


ancient crevices hide piercing secrets





Chipmunks scold, jays protest, cicadas whine


lay back we wont hurt you


lay back we won't tell -


overwhelming influence





Cold sun sets on the raucous jabber of distant birds


the screech of the saws quieted.


winter, the poignant distillation of silence,


yet again.

HELP! What is this poem about and is it any GOOD?
Don't know what it's about. It's not very good.
Reply:Forest Dreams? Earth's Callings?


It's a unique poem, talking about many different things


good
Reply:IT'S YES VERY GOOD!!


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