If you have time plz read this my child is stuck and doesnt know what to write see anyhting else to add tell n

"Kea can we go home now" ? grumpily asked Koe " I guess" madly said Kea. They had just went to the great 6 cinema movie theater and saw DRAGONS FIRE FLAME.it was about a dragon that had been born to breath fire. it killed all the dangerous people. but then there was n one else so he started to breath fire everywhere. and the people got so scared that they killed the dragon. It was the winter of ' 94 there so Koe was shivering with his coldness .kea had warned him to wear a coat since it was only gonna be 34 degrees outside. Kea, a girl,at the age of 12 who was in 6Th grade . koe was a boy at the age of 7 in the 2ND grade. they where brother and sister."woof woof"Oh and they have a dog too.its named Lea after there aunt.It's a two year old terrier in dog years that is.It is named after there aunt because she did everything with Kea and Koe she died in 1992 . they watched the dog play in the snow . while they laughed with coldness and joy mixed together.then the dog started shivering so they had to go then. they went through a lot of snow when then they saw that there dog was licking snow. they laughed so hard from the Winn Dixie smile that they fell in the snow. they sat there for a few minutes then they got up to start back up on there way home.


It was about 6 :10 when they finally got home .It took them 20 minutes to get home. "yeah were finally home"!!! said Koe."Screech" they opened the door . There mom was in the kitchen making a pie . She made the best pies ever. This pie smelt like apple . yum-mm!!!! said Koe There mother laughed . There mothers name was Andrea. She is thirty four. "time for dinner kids Andrea yelled.they were having a big turkey with sweet potatoes and creamy mashed potatoes."yummy" said koe."screech" the doored opened it was there dad Andrew, he was thirty five.Andrew was at work he worked at a factory .


After dinner they had to brush there teeth ,take a shower, and go to bed . the next morning they went to school. Kea was in sixth and Koe was in second.Kea did not like math but did like spelling .Koe did not like spelling but did like math. After school they went to the public library.Kea and Koe found a book together.It was called mystery songs.They went to the desk to check out the book."how are you today" asked the librarian? "okay"said Kea and Koe.


On there way back home they took a shortcut through the woods. All of the sudden they saw something strange a snow man that read "CHARLIE". They looked at it for a while then went home.That night they read some of the book then they found a song called CHARLIE THE SNOWMAN. That night they had leftovers .Then brushed there teeth ,took a shower ,and went to bed.


The next morning they didn't have no school. So they went to the woods to see Charlie. They Brang the book with them. "maybe if we sing he'll come to life"said Koe. "you can but I'm not "said Kea. When they got There Koe started to sing the song and something happened.Charlie started to move and talk.He said huh (yawn) "that was hard staying still for that long of a time".Kea's jaw dropped to her toes. "what is your name"? Koe asked . "Charliepolopudy but everybody calls me Charlie" said Charlie . "WHO who's everybody" asked kea."All the snowmen and snow girls do" said Charlie " Oh" said Kea. " do you want to know something......... do never sing that song to MAX2"demanded Charlie. "why" asked Koe . "Because he's my arch enemy, and he'll be your's some day to"said Charlie.Then Kea and Koe said goodbye and left.Well they didn't believe him .Then Koe wanted to sing so he sang the song he just learned. but Kea looked around for a while .then she said" KO KO Koe I don't think you should sing that" but he already had finished . MAX 2 came alive ."ROAR" they ran back to the woods and hided behind Charlie. Then Charlie and MAX 2 had a BATTLE !!All of the sudden charlie yelled " GIVE ME THE BOOK" then he said a magical song and it made him melt for thousands of years. Then they started to cry and said there apologies. then charlie said he had to go and they cried even more. koe said he didn't want him to go. they walked him back to his home, while koe walk in very slow so he could have charlie stay as Long as possible. then they got there and they said goodbye one more time. koe got very sad and had a tantrum he told kea that he was not moving one inch from this spot. as they said that charlie said that he had to go as hey sat in place to be confused to stone . kea pulled koe back so he wouldn't turn into stone too. it was almost too late he cried and said No.


next year next year next year next year next year next year





CHARLIE OH CHARLIE WHERE ARE YOU

If you have time plz read this my child is stuck and doesnt know what to write see anyhting else to add tell n
I am not sure what you want us to do. If it is correcting it, there are a few grammar mistakes. In the 4th line n should be no and names should all have caps. brush there teeth should be brush their teeth,some of the words that are caps. should not be like : roar, battle,who long "Charlie the Snowman " should be in "s.next year should have apostrophies after each. Except the last on, a period. The story its'self sounds fine.