Brilliant! Good, or Bad?

Sleep my love, the coming day is long.





Rest is needed for you now, rest and sing my song.





Come sweet love, come to stay, come rest softly; drift away.





Feel your spirit fly. Ride the wind of a winter’s day.





The mist, the cold, the air so pure.


We soar, we dive, your heart’s my lure.





Dreams of me drift, hearts awaken,


night clouds shift, our souls are taken.





The storm it sweeps us along. I cry to hear your phantom’s song.





The night to short to hold our love; it flays into the vastness above.





No stronger word, then love.


Nay, there is but one; with more feeling and loathing then the rising sun.





Hate, does not become us my dear, my gentle, my lovely one.





Our love will last through hate and hell; through misery, pain, through all that befell.





My passion burns, like fire.





Come my angel, our time is dire.





I can not leave you, this night alone;





with only dreams, to drift and roam.





Love, a lasting peace.





Free my beloved, for our hearts to feast.





Come with me now, and don’t look away.





I have you now; hear with me, to stay.

Brilliant! Good, or Bad?
some of the lines are pretty good.. over all, i give it a B-.
Reply:Brilliant!!
Reply:bag of shite!
Reply:yeah.....uh...is this a ridlle?
Reply:Brilliant
Reply:Soooooo nice...It's amazing!!





u r so sweet!