How is this "Love "poem...?

LOVE LOVE AND LOVE


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Love is





Not cold...





Love is





Not hot...





Love is





Not warm...





Love is





Not summer...





Love is





Not winter...





Love is





Not rainee...





Love is





Not soft...





Love is





Not heard...





Love is





Not sweet...





Love is





Not spicee...





Love is





Not tasty...





Love is





Not money...





Love is





Not huney...





Love is





Not ...





Not...not





At all





But...





Feel too all





All too feel with





Love ...





Love...





Love...





Love...





Love...





That is a love...





With love and love...





++otteri selvakumar

How is this "Love "poem...?
uhh... hmm...


i guess


i dont see the point of this.
Reply:With all due respect, and in my own offering of two cents.





"Love is,


even when it seems it isn't"





Steven Wolf 2007
Reply:its good, but u can improve it using bigger words, rather than using primary words, but i like it :D





e.g preciouse, valiant.........
Reply:Try "rainy, spicy, and honey" to correct misspellings. If you are going to do a list poem, you can drop many of the "love is not"s...just say, "love is not" then list what it is not. Constantly saying "love is" line break, then "not...whatever" is annoying and distracts from what you're trying to say.





keep writing...keep editing
Reply:LOVE is


Not a Poem, yet!





Sorry!, but, that is only my opinion!